kaise batau
kaise batau main tumhe mere liye tum kaun ho
tum hi ho meri zameen
tum hi ho mera aasman
tum hi ho mera mukaam
tum hi ho mera jahaan
kaise batau main tumhe mere liye tum kaun ho
tum hi ho meri arzoo
tum hi ho vo justju
tum hi ho vo aasu
tum hi mere roobaroo
kaise batau main tumhe mere liye tum kaun ho
tum hi ho mere vo geet
tum hi ho meri vo preet
tum hi ho mere rom rom
tum hi ho mera vo kaum
kaise batau main tumhe mere liye tum kaun ho
tum hi ho mera ikraar
tum hi ho mera inkaar
tum hi ho mera vo pyar
tum hi mere dil ki jhankaar
kaise batau main tumhe mere liye tum kaun ho
tum hi meri bhavna
tum bin main deewana
tumse nahi main anjaana
tum hi meri prerna
kaise batau main tumhe mere liye tum kaun ho
tum hi ho meri dhadkan
tum hi ho mera jeevan
tum hi mere zehen me
tum hi meri yaad me
kaise batau main tumhe mere liye tum kaun ho
tum hi ho khushi meri
tum hi meri jaan ho
tum mera eman ho
tumhare bin zindgi adhuri
kaise??? aakhir kaise batau main tumhe mere liye tum kaun ho??
alfaaz nahi
shabd nahi
kehne ko boht kuch hai
par waqt bhi sahi nahi
kismat nahi
na sunne ki himmat nahi
lavz nahi
aur ab , aur ab to kehne ko kuch raha bhi nahi.
kaise batau main tumhe mere liye tum kaun ho
tum hi ho meri zameen
tum hi ho mera aasman
tum hi ho mera mukaam
tum hi ho mera jahaan
kaise batau main tumhe mere liye tum kaun ho
tum hi ho meri arzoo
tum hi ho vo justju
tum hi ho vo aasu
tum hi mere roobaroo
kaise batau main tumhe mere liye tum kaun ho
tum hi ho mere vo geet
tum hi ho meri vo preet
tum hi ho mere rom rom
tum hi ho mera vo kaum
kaise batau main tumhe mere liye tum kaun ho
tum hi ho mera ikraar
tum hi ho mera inkaar
tum hi ho mera vo pyar
tum hi mere dil ki jhankaar
kaise batau main tumhe mere liye tum kaun ho
tum hi meri bhavna
tum bin main deewana
tumse nahi main anjaana
tum hi meri prerna
kaise batau main tumhe mere liye tum kaun ho
tum hi ho meri dhadkan
tum hi ho mera jeevan
tum hi mere zehen me
tum hi meri yaad me
kaise batau main tumhe mere liye tum kaun ho
tum hi ho khushi meri
tum hi meri jaan ho
tum mera eman ho
tumhare bin zindgi adhuri
kaise??? aakhir kaise batau main tumhe mere liye tum kaun ho??
alfaaz nahi
shabd nahi
kehne ko boht kuch hai
par waqt bhi sahi nahi
kismat nahi
na sunne ki himmat nahi
lavz nahi
aur ab , aur ab to kehne ko kuch raha bhi nahi.
8 comments:
was really gud creation my dear....... bt who's dis gal "kaise btaun me tum mere liye kaun ho" hmmmmm????????
phewwwww real real romantic weird that ur single dude despite being so romantic at heart, this is sumthin ideal to sing out to ur gf when uve had a fight!
sodhi bhai.....
kaun h vo???he he....
dis one's better!!
but yeah, like everyone, even i wud like to know.."kaun hai woh"???
lolzzzz
keep up da gud work!!
I am someone who loves prose more than poetry so I am not a great judge . whatever for this one , the good part of it is that it keeps it's meter and that's also the problem but that may be something that I feel because I don't like things with perfect meter . I like the words to explore themselves . But most Important part in writing is that the writer should have fun with it which definitely comes out in this one. It is an infectious thing,having fun with your writing and you have it Golu and you are a poet, How can that girl can't say no.
a good creation bro
brain me chemical locha hone se tu poet ban gaya
kiski yadon ne itna tadpa diya tujhe bhai??
its easier to write in english dan in hindi n u ve written it very well ...cz i personally find hindi poems quite boring ...but dis one is stupendous ..well one!!!
very touchy n a nice poem but i still feel that i have already read this poem...i have a strong feeling that this poem was either written by premchand or mahadevi verma...but leave it...dude if this poem is actually written by you,then a great work n if it's been copied,then a real smart work!!!!
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